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<!--Generated by Squarespace Site Server v5.11.81 (http://www.squarespace.com/) on Fri, 01 Jun 2012 09:27:43 GMT--><rss xmlns:content="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/content/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/" xmlns:itunes="http://www.itunes.com/dtds/podcast-1.0.dtd" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" version="2.0"><channel><title>BLOG</title><link>http://www.philmoore.com.au/journal/</link><description></description><lastBuildDate>Thu, 09 Feb 2012 01:07:26 +0000</lastBuildDate><copyright></copyright><language>en-AU</language><generator>Squarespace Site Server v5.11.81 (http://www.squarespace.com/)</generator><item><title>Religion vs Science</title><dc:creator>Phil Moore</dc:creator><pubDate>Thu, 09 Feb 2012 00:43:36 +0000</pubDate><link>http://www.philmoore.com.au/journal/2012/2/9/religion-vs-science.html</link><guid isPermaLink="false">867683:10166378:14941233</guid><description><![CDATA[<p><em>I posted this reply to a recent LinkedIn Query on the TED forum. Thought it might be worth posting here as well.</em></p>
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<p>Religion and science are different things. Take the bible (or any other religious work) as metaphor. It is storytelling as Myth. It may be based on historical facts, but its purpose is not to teach history - or science - but to illuminate moral questions, and the human condition through mythological storytelling. Science is about facts and its isn't till you get into deep quantum physics &nbsp;- Big bang etc - that the two start to blur and it becomes a philosophical conundrum</p>
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<p>Science doesn't contradict faith. It only contradicts Dogma. Faith is about stuff Science cannot and never will be able to explain. Read between the lines of the Bible and don't take it literally, and there is no conflict. Also remember it was written by people living in a very different period and culture. Things chance. Attitudes change. But basic moral values don't, as the ten commandments demonstrate.This is true of all religions.</p>
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<div>The story of Adam and Eve and the whole of Genesis has nothing to do actually with the origin of life and the universe - Evolution. It has to do with why humans are the way they are emotionally and morally. The Garden of Eden, the serpent and the 'Fruit of the Tree of knowledge of Good and Evil' is about the birth of moral discrimination - the thing that makes us HUMAN psychologically, not physically. Deciding if actions are either Good or Bad. It's a human construct because the universe doesn't care - God doesn't care about good or bad. Stuff just IS.&nbsp;</div>
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<div>The Entire Bible and the dogma that has built up around it stems from this - Good vs Evil. Right and wrong. See past the Dogma to the core moral values and all religious writings have value.&nbsp;</div>
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<div>"Religion has its place, but it is the road, not the destination. The best religion is one without dogma. It teaches, but does not indoctrinate. It codifies knowledge, while inspiring you to move beyond any such boundaries."</div>
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<div>- The Prophet Tobias</div>
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</div>]]></description><wfw:commentRss>http://www.philmoore.com.au/journal/rss-comments-entry-14941233.xml</wfw:commentRss></item><item><title>Top ten movies I have never seen</title><dc:creator>Phil Moore</dc:creator><pubDate>Sun, 04 Dec 2011 21:17:37 +0000</pubDate><link>http://www.philmoore.com.au/journal/2011/12/5/top-ten-movies-i-have-never-seen.html</link><guid isPermaLink="false">867683:10166378:13971779</guid><description><![CDATA[<p>After reading a blog by Edgar Wright on the top ten movies he was embarrassed to admit he had never seen, I thought I would submit my own such list. Edgar's list (<a href="http://t.co/WmjeAZUL">http://t.co/WmjeAZUL</a>) Included several films I haven't seen, but many seemed rather obscure to me, which speaks to his cinema knowledge.</p>
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<div id="_mcePaste">I actually had trouble thinking of titles for my own list, so I scoured the IMDB top 250 films (<a href="http://t.co/WmjeAZUL">http://t.co/WmjeAZUL</a>). In no particular order then, &nbsp;here are my top ten films I should have seen by now but never have.</div>
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<div><strong>1. &nbsp;The Lives Of Others.</strong></div>
<div>#56 on the IMDB list (<a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0405094/">http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0405094/</a>).</div>
<div>I really don't know much about this film but it sounds a little like the Coppola Film 'The Conversation' (one I watched again very recently). But it seems highly regarded so I will check it out.</div>
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<div><strong>2. The Prestige </strong></div>
<div><strong>&nbsp;</strong>( <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0482571/">http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0482571/</a>)</div>
<div>I must admit this one didn't really intrigue much when it was first released so I just haven't caught up with it. But given it has scored so well on this list maybe its one I should make a point of seeing.</div>
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<div><strong>3. Full Metal Jacket</strong></div>
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<div>I'm a big Kubrick fan and have seen ALL his other films and own them all on DVD or Blu-ray; so it is odd that this one has escaped me so far. This is the first in this list I really am embarrassed to say I haven't seen yet. Something I will remedy very soon.</div>
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<div><strong>4. OldBoy</strong></div>
<div><strong>&nbsp;</strong> (<a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0364569/">http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0364569/</a>)</div>
<div>I started to watch this one night a while back, but just wasn't in the mood I guess. So I need to give this another chance.</div>
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<div><strong>5. Downfall </strong></div>
<div><strong>&nbsp;</strong>( <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0363163/">http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0363163/</a>)</div>
<div>I've seen several of the satires using the 'Hitler raging at his staff scene' with different subtitles. but have not yet seen the entire film. Really want to, but it hasn't crossed my path yet.&nbsp;</div>
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<div><strong>6. Grave of The Fireflies</strong></div>
<div><strong>&nbsp;</strong> ( <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0095327/">http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0095327/</a>)</div>
<div>I love Japanese Anime and especially the Ghibli studio films and those of course of Hayao Miyazaki. But I have yet to see this one. Some of these are hard to track down on disc. I am really hoping they do a Blu-ray collection of all these film in the near future.</div>
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<div><strong>7. Black Swan</strong></div>
<div><strong>&nbsp;</strong> (<a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0947798/">http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0947798/</a>)</div>
<div>Another one I just haven't caught up with yet. Must see it soon.</div>
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<div><strong>8. Ikiru</strong></div>
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<div>Am also a big Kurosawa fan, but this and I must admit many more of his earlier film efforts I have yet to see. Another Director I am hoping to see a comprehensive Blu-Ray collection of his work come out soon. (There's an excellent Criterion DVD collection, but I am holding out for Blu-ray)&nbsp;</div>
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<div><strong>&nbsp;</strong> ( <a href="http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0401383/">http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0401383/</a>)</div>
<div>I bought this on DVD over a year ago and I still haven't watched it. I promise myself to do so within the next few weeks.</div>
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<div><strong>10. Peeping Tom</strong></div>
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<div>This is not on the IMDB top 250, but is a film that keep coming up lately as one I really must get.&nbsp;</div>
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<div id="_mcePaste">I am big fan of Michael Powell, and while I haven't seen everything he's directed (there's a lot) I've seen and have on DVD or Blu-ray &nbsp;all the most notable - except this later film which has become something of a cult in retrospect. One I willl add to my collection very soon.</div>
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<div id="_mcePaste">&nbsp;&nbsp;</div>]]></description><wfw:commentRss>http://www.philmoore.com.au/journal/rss-comments-entry-13971779.xml</wfw:commentRss></item><item><title>The passing of a talent and dear friend</title><dc:creator>Phil Moore</dc:creator><pubDate>Tue, 15 Nov 2011 03:01:36 +0000</pubDate><link>http://www.philmoore.com.au/journal/2011/11/15/the-passing-of-a-talent-and-dear-friend.html</link><guid isPermaLink="false">867683:10166378:13725745</guid><description><![CDATA[<p>Was very sorry to hear this week of the passing of Pushkana Chan, who was Production Designer for my first feature film - Mortal Fools.&nbsp;</p>
<p>Born in Burma and orphaned during a rebel incursion, Pushkana was taken in by&nbsp;the theatre community and overcame hysterical blindness to become the country&rsquo;s&nbsp;most acclaimed set designer by the age of 18. Coming to Australia with a tour of&nbsp;Burmese culture and arts, he decided to stay and has been worked in theatre and&nbsp;film for the next ten years on productions ranging from Beckett to Shakespeare, the&nbsp;acclaimed &lsquo;Military Must Die&rsquo; and &lsquo;Beefcake Boys Revue&rsquo;. Winner of the&nbsp;Theatre Arts Young Designer of the Year Award, Mortal Fools was his first and only feature film.&nbsp;</p>
<p>Pushka, as he was affectionately known, made many friends in the local film and theatre industries and will be sadly missed.</p>
<p>&nbsp;</p>]]></description><wfw:commentRss>http://www.philmoore.com.au/journal/rss-comments-entry-13725745.xml</wfw:commentRss></item><item><title>Aussie films stop pulling their punches</title><dc:creator>Phil Moore</dc:creator><pubDate>Mon, 19 Sep 2011 12:41:27 +0000</pubDate><link>http://www.philmoore.com.au/journal/2011/9/19/aussie-films-stop-pulling-their-punches.html</link><guid isPermaLink="false">867683:10166378:12912208</guid><description><![CDATA[<p>Just watched two Australian films in a row - Tomorrow When The War Began, and The Loved Ones. And while I am coming to these films a bit late, both give me renewed hope for the Australian film industry.</p>
<p>"Tomorrow..." Is an action-adventure, and starts a bit slow with some rather cliched stereotype characters. It also has some very on-the-nose dialogue throughout. But despite all this, it has a strong performance from the lead (Caitlin Stasey) and a couple of very well done action set-pieces. But more importantly perhaps it doesn't suffer from the thing that has plagued so many Aussie films in my opinion - pulling it's punches. Too many films in the past simply don't take their story and their lead character as far as they could. They stop short of going all the way, which leaves one with a very unsatisfying result. "Tomorrow..." could have gone a bit further but given it's target audience (teenagers) it still went to places most Aussie teen flics avoid.</p>
<p>"The Loved Ones" was more full-on than I expected. It's a horror film that actually goes all the way. It doesn't pull it's punches. And by the end of it you are quite exhausted, and feel like you've really been on a harrowing journey. The script is taught and well-structured, simple and compelling. The performances are all excellent, and the cinematography and direction terrific. The music is also outstanding. I really didn't think I would like the film as much as I did, since I am not a huge horror fan, but I recognize a well-made film when I see it.</p>
<p>Both these film give me hope for the Aussie film industry. Especially as "Tomorrow..." did so well in the cinemas, and "Loved Ones" was financed by Screen Australia and Film Vic.</p>
<p>Congrats to all involved in both films. Keep it up.</p>]]></description><wfw:commentRss>http://www.philmoore.com.au/journal/rss-comments-entry-12912208.xml</wfw:commentRss></item><item><title>SMPTE 2011 videos</title><dc:creator>Phil Moore</dc:creator><pubDate>Fri, 22 Jul 2011 22:33:16 +0000</pubDate><link>http://www.philmoore.com.au/journal/2011/7/23/smpte-2011-videos.html</link><guid isPermaLink="false">867683:10166378:12224754</guid><description><![CDATA[<p>Here is my coverage of the SMPTE show - in two parts.</p>
<p>Part 1- <iframe width="560" height="349" src="http://www.youtube.com/embed/lKOyeJxO1z4" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe></p>
<p>Part 2 - <iframe width="560" height="349" src="http://www.youtube.com/embed/KKilefnZn_Y" frameborder="0" allowfullscreen></iframe></p>]]></description><wfw:commentRss>http://www.philmoore.com.au/journal/rss-comments-entry-12224754.xml</wfw:commentRss></item><item><title>SMPTE 2011</title><dc:creator>Phil Moore</dc:creator><pubDate>Wed, 20 Jul 2011 01:37:48 +0000</pubDate><link>http://www.philmoore.com.au/journal/2011/7/20/smpte-2011.html</link><guid isPermaLink="false">867683:10166378:12190289</guid><description><![CDATA[<p>Went to the first day of the SMPTE 2011 show yesterday. Shot some video interviews with some of the stallhollders and a lengthy one with Cinematographer and friend Pieter DeVries. Will get this video up as soon as I have something cut together, but it will also appear on the November PC User 2011 cover DVD.</p>
<p>First impressions of the show - lots of 3D. Both JVC and Sony were showing off very small professional quality 3D cameras. Small as in the-palm-of-your-hand small. JVC also had some impressive new 3D monitors, and a box that would convert 2D images into 3D on the fly. They were spruiking it more as a post-production tool where you could adjust the stereoscopic settings suitable for each scene or shot - but even just on a default setting converting <em>The Fifth Element </em>in real time it looked pretty impressive. Don't know how it would hold up on long-term viewing but I can imagine a possible consumer product there as a 3D conversion set-top box.</p>
<p>The two new top of the range cameras that most impressed were the Arri Alexa, and the prototype for the new Sony 8K digital camera - the F65 CineAlta. Both sport a simplified menu interface and button controls, solving the one of the biggest bugbears of DOPs that the camera are just getting too complicated. A DOP wants to shoot not mess with menus.&nbsp;</p>
<p>The Lemac stand was very busy showing off the range of gear they have to offer - including the Red Epic, a Canon 5D with all attachments and peripheral looking like some digital Frankenstein monster; and the new Steadicam Tango - a jib arm that you wear with a vest which opens up a whole new range of fluid shots in awkward places. Intended for lightweight HD cameras around 3Kg. Wait till you see the video demo of that one!</p>
<p>Had a look at the new Newtek Tricaster, $49k for the full system, but this is a compelte production &nbsp; studio in a box for 8 camera recording and streaming. This is the system that the new <a href="http://www.twit.tv">TWiT studios</a> are going to use and it would be great is film schools started teaching this process - IP-TV - as this is where the future of broadcasting is.</p>
<p>On the lighter side we ran into a fellow showing off some old tech from his personal collection. Great stuff - Laser discs, old reel-to-reel VTRs, a microbee. Ahh the memories....&nbsp;</p>
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<p>&nbsp;</p>]]></description><wfw:commentRss>http://www.philmoore.com.au/journal/rss-comments-entry-12190289.xml</wfw:commentRss></item><item><title>Ten Commandments of Scriptwriting</title><dc:creator>Phil Moore</dc:creator><pubDate>Sun, 24 Apr 2011 04:57:25 +0000</pubDate><link>http://www.philmoore.com.au/journal/2011/4/24/ten-commandments-of-scriptwriting.html</link><guid isPermaLink="false">867683:10166378:11249120</guid><description><![CDATA[<p>I was wondering what to post as my first BLOG entry, and decided to give you an extract from the first chapter from a book I am working on entitled "Fuck Art, Just Tell The Story." My ten commandments of screenwriting:</p>
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<li><strong>Thou shalt not bore</strong><br /> Keep the story moving. End every scene with a mini-cliffhanger that always      has the reader (audience) asking &ndash; &lsquo;what happens next&rsquo;. Something that      drives the action forward into the next scene. Even if the final film      suffers from poor production values, bad acting, bad sound design, and so      on, at least &ndash; thanks to the script - it isn&rsquo;t boring.<br /> <br /> </li>
<li><strong>Know thy Genre<br /> </strong>Every story has a genre. There are genre&rsquo;s and      sub-genre&rsquo;s. There are stories that mix genres (generally not more than 2      at a time). In fact most stories are a genre mix. There are 'Genre' films      (Horror, Sci-fi, Thriller, Crime...); but every film will fit a genre or      mix of genres. Know the genre you are writing in. Know what has been done      before in that genre. Know the clich&eacute;s and conventions so you can either      avoid them, or turn them to your advantage.<strong><br /> <br /> </strong></li>
<li><strong>Thou shalt avoid      redundancy<br /> </strong>Don&rsquo;t have characters or a Narrator telling us      what we&rsquo;re seeing, or talking about something we&rsquo;ve already seen. Don&rsquo;t      have characters repeating themselves (unless it is some kind of character      trait). Don&rsquo;t have a character tell another what we the audience already know. In fact I would take      this further and say you should avoid characters saying anything that the      audience might anticipate. If we can guess what they are about to say &ndash;      don&rsquo;t say it. Rather, have them skip to the line after the obvious response, or say something totally unexpected (while      keeping in character of course). This hooks back into Commandment #1.<strong><br /> <br /> </strong></li>
<li><strong>Thou shalt handle      exposition gracefully<br /> </strong>Most stories require some exposition at some      point. This is where you have to convey information to the audience so they can understand what&rsquo;s going      on. It is often difficult to get this information across without it      sounding like a lecture, or a character spouting it for no other reason      than that we the audience need to know. Avoid having a character tell      another what they both already know. Try to integrate expositional      dialogue in a character or story moment. Make it do something else, aside      from convey information. Arguments are often a good way to get exposition across without the audience realising. If at all possible, do it visually.<br /> <br /> <strong></strong></li>
<li><strong>Thou shalt recognize      that film is a visual medium &ndash; write visually.<br /> </strong>Show it, don&rsquo;t say it. There are exceptions of      course with stories that rely on witty or poetical dialogue, often based      on stage plays. No-one tells Tarantino or Kevin Smith to be less wordy, that's their thing. But the more you can show visually without characters      telling us what is going on, the better. This extends to removing dialogue      that is simply not necessary when a well acted close-up can say just as      much &ndash; if not more. <br /> <br /> Some of you may be thinking about Shakespeare right now. The best      Shakespeare films are those that are not afraid to cut dialogue (however      wonderful it may be) in favour of presenting the same information      visually. A lot of Shakespeare&rsquo;s dialogue is there because he had to work      within the limitations of the stage. You don&rsquo;t.<br /><strong><br /></strong></li>
<li><strong>Thou shalt not direct&nbsp;<br /></strong>Do not pepper your script with camera angles,      or references to Wide Shots, Close-up, Slow Motion, Tracking shot, or      other technical guides which are the domain of the Director. Instead,      indicate how you imagine a shot to look in how you describe it. Give the      reader a clear mental picture of the action, rather than a technical      description of how you think it should be filmed. Technical descriptions      like this only detract from the read and offend potential directors.<br /><br />There are exceptions of course, and if a moment demands that you explain a      shot to convey the proper mental image then do so &ndash; but do it no more than      once or twice in a script.&nbsp;<br /><br />This applies even if you intend to direct the script. For now you are not      the director; you are the writer. And you are not the only person who is      going to read this script.<br /><strong><br /></strong></li>
<li><strong>Thou shalt keep thy      paragraphs small<br /></strong>Large blocks of text look daunting<strong>. </strong>A long dialogue speech in a screenplay is unusual and usually not      recommended (see 5 above). Try to have paragraphs of action describe what can be visualised      as a single shot in the film. It should be broken up into bite-sized      chunks of one or two sentences. It can even be one word. And it is      acceptable these days to use <em>Italics</em> and CAPITALS and EXCLAMATION MARKS!!!!!! To get a point across sometimes.<br /><strong><br /></strong></li>
<li><strong>Keep it Simple Stupid<br /></strong>In most cases the dialogue characters speak      should be simple and uncomplicated. No big, clever words; and avoid      qualifiers (adjectives and adverbs) whenever possible. Apply the KISS      principle always. The same is true for action paragraphs and stage      directions. Avoid flowery descriptions; just get to the point. Also use      active rather than passive language. &lsquo;He opens the coffin&rsquo;, is stronger      than &lsquo;He begins to lift the lid on the coffin.&rdquo;&nbsp;<br /><br />There are exceptions here too, depending on the style you want to evoke for      the film or a particular character&rsquo;s vocabulary. Some writers are renowned      for their colourful and verbose descriptions, which can add to the fun of      reading the script and help give a sense of the intended style through the      words. As well as colourful, unusual dialogue. As long as it is true to the characters and situation this is a good thing. But most of the time short and sweet is the best approach. The same      is true of whole scenes &ndash; usually keep them short and to the point. No      more than 2 pages as a rule (some writers of course [Like Aaron Sorkin] break this 2-page rule regularly, but they know what they are doing. Be sure you do too before you write a ten-page dialogue scene).&nbsp;<br /><strong><br /></strong></li>
<li><strong>Story is king (or      Thou shalt kill thy babies when necessary)&nbsp;<br /></strong>This refers to deleting lines, or whole      scenes, if you find they are not serving the story or the character &ndash;      despite them being the best thing you&rsquo;ve ever written. A joke or line, or      scene, or entire sequence may be brilliant in itself, but if it isn&rsquo;t      serving the story &ndash; cut it. If you can remove it, and it doesn&rsquo;t affect      the story adversely &ndash; then it doesn&rsquo;t belong there.<br /><strong><br /></strong></li>
<li><strong>Though shalt use the      proper format<br /></strong>A good story, well told, will always win out      regardless of how it has been written down. Nevertheless the correct      formatting and presentation gives a good first impression to the reader,      and indicates that you are a writer who knows at least how to present a screenplay. It      also makes it easier to read for experienced readers, for whom the      familiar formatting becomes invisible.</li>
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<p>I feel a writer also has a responsibility to use correct english. To phrase things appropriately, to spell correctly, and to avoid meaningless phrases like &ldquo;in the fullness of time&rdquo; or &ldquo;If I&rsquo;ve told you once I&rsquo;ve told you a hundred times&rdquo; (who actually ever says this?). &nbsp;This is balanced with the need to have characters talk in a way that is real to them &ndash; even if it is grammatically wrong; and have action paragraphs break the rules sometimes for a desired effect. All I ask, Is that you know what good English looks like &ndash; even if your characters don&rsquo;t.</p>]]></description><wfw:commentRss>http://www.philmoore.com.au/journal/rss-comments-entry-11249120.xml</wfw:commentRss></item></channel></rss>
